So, I was planning to write out an explanation of the story, but I just need to stop putting this off. There are plot gaps, characters that disappear, and people who show up with no explanation. In writing as much as I did I allowed myself no time to edit. That will happen eventually, but I need to step away from the story for a while.
It didn't turn out the way I thought it would. Maybe it will someday. At least I did it.
Read and comment here. Thoughts are much appreciated.
